Not bad! I see you are changing your priorities: they are now more artistic than purely gayish. I think that just a bit more space would be quite a good solution IMO: the espression of the hands is the main motif here, and there is a strong suggestion of some air in these fingers broadening. The lighting seems all correct. I like this kind of expression.
As usual, your use lighting is fantastic! I like the different gray scales given by the different depth and shadows. Great bodies, great compositions.....you are fast becomming a favorite in b/w photography